Once upon a time, there was a country called “Ice Country”. In this
country there were ice everywhere, the climate was cold all year round. A
little boy grew up here, his name is Toshiro. He lived with his parents and
his cousin, Hinamori. In the “Ice Country” was the ice made traveling very
hard, people couldn’t go anywhere. There was also lack of services, the
government wouldn’t provide anything for the people. Then the people had
to wait until the ice had melted a little and traveling work again. The country
as also too crowded, people kept moving into the country. They thought that
the country had everything they need. These push factors caused Toshiro’s
family to flee to another country to settle. Although “Ice Country” had been
their homeland for generations, because of the future for the family,
Toshiro’s parents decided it would be best if they move. There were still
many countries which were not crowded, but the family had decided to
relocate to “Love, Happiness and Freedom Country”.
“Love, Happiness and Freedom Country” had many pull factors: the
government provided the citizens with enough services, the climate and
weather was always peaceful here. Also the country had few people, few
people made the environment clean. It also made traveling into an
affordable thing. The benefits of going to this country were: Toshiro and
his cousin could have more education since the traveling was so easy, they
couldn’t be sick so easily because the environment is so clean. The family
could have anything they want now that the government provided good
services. There could also be negative benefits here: Toshiro and his cousin
will miss all their good friends back in the “Ice Country”, if the education
didn’t suit Toshiro and his cousin they couldn’t get any. Also if there’s too
little people they can’t interact. When they leave “ Ice Country”, there’s
good benefits: the family can escape poverty, find hope for their next
generations, avoid sickness,etc. Bad benefits could also be luring behind
them: have to made a lot of paperwork, leave their family, friends and
neighbors behind them. Toshiro and his cousin have to learn the “Love,
Happiness and Freedom Country” official language. When Toshiro finished
thinking these things, the family already arrived at the airport. They’ve gone
through all the customs, then they found themselves on a plane. After that,
the family settle in “Love, Happiness and Freedom Country” until now.
I love your story. You tell the readers a lot of things that are both positive and negative.
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